Course Summary

This is a summary of my work throughout the course, hopefully of value during my assessment.

Part 1

For the first exercise I chose to study E.H. Shepard and one of my favourite comics artists Mike Mignola. Although they initially seemed like extremely different artists, I managed to find some similarities in theme, and found it interesting to juxtapose the two. I decided to draw the same subject when emulating both artists to demonstrate their differences in style, and I think I got off to a strong start producing two illustrations that I’m still quite proud of.

For the second exercise I got a newspaper and worked on an editorial cartoon, making something I hoped was funny and relevant.

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For the assignment I chose to experiment with a fairly unfamiliar medium and did a linocut. I used a landscape for the cover, taken from a reference of some local scenery, and made some stamps reflecting different things that interest me. I had some issues throughout the process but in the end I enjoyed tackling the assignment creatively and coming up with something interesting.

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My initial thoughts on part 1 were that I found the experience exciting and gratifying, and I was eager to press on. Based on the feedback I received I endeavoured to do more cross-referencing and secondary research, and to be less inclined to always go with my first idea when brainstorming.

Part 2

Part 2 was mostly about learning different tools and approaches to tackle briefs. In the first few excercises I wrote a mock-brief for one of my favourite video games, and created some spider diagrams.

When doing the Words into pictures exercise, I was initially pretty excited but found the exercise more difficult than expected. I found that I was thinking about it too hard, or overly concerned with making finished looking drawings. Eventually I drew some quick images trying to sort of visually explore a scene, and I was happy enough with the result.

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The moodboard was one exercise I was loath to do, but I was eagre to give it my best effort and approach it with an open mind. I decided to make a collage from photos of the surrounding area, I took a field trip with my camera and collected a lot of references and put together a scene that I felt represented destruction. I was actually really happy with this exercise and I liked the way I approached it in a lateral way.

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The exercise on reference I spent a lot of time researching. I got library books, did online research and even watched films from the 50s for a range of visual reference. For my final illustration I chose to view the brief in an interprative way and drew my chracter on a street sitting on the hood of his car. My tutor said that I was likely playing too loose with the brief and needed to focus more on delivering what was being asked in the future.

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I was quite proud of the exercise on choosing content, and created something I felt really complemented the text. The process for that exercise I found very rewarding.

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Carrying on I worked through the objective and subjective drawings, and the exercise experimenting with black and white.

I enjoyed the exercise on visual metaphors and had fun riffing on the censorship of the press, choosing to lampoon a certain US president.

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The exercise on exploring different painting techniques, again was criticised for straying off brief. I decided to experiment with creating my own sketchbook from different materials, using thread and a punch to bind it, then filling it with different images of cats in a variety of materials. I definitely could have been more deliberate and thorough, and maybe approached the exercise in better faith.

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The second assignment I feel was something of a missed opportunity, and the end result I find a little uninspired and lifeless, and doesn’t reflect my goals or style as an artist.

Reflecting on my work for this part, much of my decision making is done on impulse or spontaneously, which I think has some value creatively. But being more willing to explore different options and being more methodical and thoughtful when researching and considering briefs will help me grow as an artist.

Part 3

Moving on to part 3, I began by playing around with cutouts and compositions, and surprised myself by how rewarding and fun I found it.

With image development, I think I found a compelling image but ultimately didn’t choose a composition that was as interesting as it could have been, and the final result to be honest is very derivative. I found this exercise to be a missed opportunity.

The viewpoint exercise was valuable, and one worth repeating in the future.

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I worked myself into a panic doing the exercise on abstract illustration, but surprisingly enjoyed the process and thought the final illustration had some merit.

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The exercise on giving instructions was a fun challenge, and I think I created something quite cute and met the goal of the exercise.

For the mock-up exercise, I was very excited to tackle this assignment and thought the idea of redesigning a book cover was really fun and interesting.

I chose a book that I had just finished reading, that I happened to think had a fairly weak cover illustration, Dracula. I spent a lot of time researching this assignment! Pulling up dozens of alternate covers throughout the years, and watching several film adaptations for inspiration. I was really pleased with the final result.

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My tutor felt it was a bit of a missed opportunity, as I had been a bit gung-ho to produce an illustration and applied it to a dated Penguin publication layout, effectively ignoring the graphic design component of the exercise. While fair criticisms, I’m still very happy with the result.

Finally for the assignment, I thought that my research was well informed and thoughtful, but I’m disappointed with the presentation of the final piece. My main takeaway from this part of the course was that I needed to pay more attention to design elements, something I had been seriously sidelining in favour of drawing.

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Part 4

In identifying tools, I began by revisiting some of my favourite Eastern inkwash painters and artists, and also doing new research to discover artists and techniques I wasn’t familiar with. I decided to redo my final piece from choosing content, attempting to emulate a Japanese inkwash style.

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Next for museum posters, I visited my local museum and took plenty of reference photos. Again, I struggled a bit with the design aspect of the exercise, creating something that was maybe overworked. For a finished piece, I digitally created a poster featuring a national revolutionary hero, Countess Constance Markiewicz.

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For children’s book covers, again I spent time researching, some things I was familiar with but also other new books on the market. I also conducted an interview with two of my young nieces and nephews as some extra market research!

My tutor felt that I over-relied on using dated sources as reference, which again I agreed was fair, moreso reflecting my own personal preferences and areas of interest. But generally I agreed that I need to broaden my area of research.

The tattoo exercise was interesting, given that it’s an area I’m knowledgable on but have no desire to participate in! I explained some various styles of tattooing and did an illustration based on Traditional or “Old school” tattooing that is my personal preference when it comes to tattoing styles.

Visual distortion took me on a strange journey. My tutor was pleased with my willingness to engage with the challenge and I think some of the outcomes were unexpected and rewarding!

For character development, I was very eagre to engage with the exercise as it’s an area of illustration I’m personally interested in pursuing as a career option. I did a large amount of research, featuring design documents from numerous media that I enjoy, and finished with two character sheets.

Finally for the assignment I did a still life around the word discovery. I brought it through several iterations, experimenting with both traditional and digital media, until arriving at something using a style I’ve been recently experimenting with. I felt beginning with a still life added something very unique to this creative process.

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My tutors comments for part 4 were overall very positive, while still pointing out the need to work on design elements more closely. I was happy with the part too, and created some work I was quite pleased with and engaged with some processes I found valuable and worth revisiting.

Part 5

Moving onto the final part I began by looking back at all the work I created thoughout the course thus far and deciding to experiment with using transfer paper to print a few of my designs on t-shirts.

For editorial illustration I felt like I made a few errors in judgment at earlier stages of the exercise that compromised what would have been a more interesting process otherwise. My choice of article to illustrate in hindsight wasn’t effective and the arbitrary challenges I imposed on myself didn’t help the quality of my work.

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I found travel guides quite an enjoyable and challenging exercise. I enjoyed the research process but found it challenging in how best to engage with the brief, trying to weigh artistic freedoms versus the challenges of being set an objective in the form of a commission. Still, I felt like the three mock-ups I created subtley represented their respective cities in different ways while still visually being part of a cohesive series.

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While being a relatively simple exercise, I found text and image to be immensely helpful. If for nothing else than I learned how to download and use different, non-default fonts. I still refer back to this exercise sometimes, and as someone with an interest in comics as a medium, found this very useful.

With packaging I struggled. I got a book on graphic design and wanted to purposefully engage with the design component of the exercise, but got jaded by the commercialism and lack of transgressive values in packaging design. My tutor was disappointed with how I engaged with the exercise, feeling that as an art student it is acceptable to be subversive when appropriate. I approached the exercise in good faith and treated it as if it was a genuine commission, and chose to stick to simple inoffensive designs.

For children’s illustrations I had fun with the research, being principally inspired by manga artist Akira Toriyama. I tried to stray from crude imitation and create something in my own style, while acknowledging my sources of inspiration.

I was nervous about doing the exercise educational strip, but I think I produced my favourite artwork from throughout the course here.

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For the final assignment I created a series of seven posters to demonstrate my interest in concept art and world building. My tutor was a bit confused by my goals, but it was basically to brainstorm the development of a fantasy environment for use in media (film or video games for example), the kind of work that professional concept artists do.

I created a timelapse video of my process.

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Part 5 reflection, future OCA courses.

Having received feedback for my work in part 5 I wanted to write a brief reflection and think about how to approach future OCA courses.

I was a bit disappointed to hear that some of my work appeared rushed, based on my tutor feedback.

In some respects you have not always taken full advantage of opportunities here to really develop your use of different media, practice techniques, use digital programs and establish your style. Some exercises appear rushed, whereby you haven’t always fully explored potential of each brief.

For this final part time management did become an issue, despite that I spent far, far more time than the recommended guideline for this section. One of the biggest challenges with distance learning and self-directed study is staying motivated to work consistently and utilising time effectively. There’s a point with all of these exercises where you can iterate forever, and there has to be a point where you submit the work that you’ve completed in as finished a state as possible within the timeframe you’ve given yourself. I stand by that I worked to a high personal standard and engaged with all the exercises. The work was completed over a long period of time and delayed several times to ensure I was happy with the quality of the work I submitted.

Hopefully I’m not sounding overly defensive, but I do think that I really tried to engage creatively and fully, even to exercises that I didn’t necessarily think that I would enjoy, and I’m happy with the body of work that I created.

Of course there are areas for improvement. I particularly struggled with certain areas of illustration that I maybe didn’t have a huge personal interest in, and definitely my methodology sometimes led me down what I considered sort of creative dead-ends. I admittedly found myself frustrated with where I had taken myself in a few of the exercises and I should have thought harder about what exactly I wanted to do and accomplish with each. My next goal is to focus on submitting for assessment and I’m keen to look at how I’ve developed as an artist, and how to improve my processes for future academic work.

Throughout part 5 I produced some of my favourite work for the course so far, and I feel like I’m closer to understanding where I want to go as an artist and developing a personal approach and style.

The next course I’m going to enrol in is Drawing 1. Some initial goals are to catalogue more of my work-in-progress and be more descriptive about those processes. I also think there’s more room to have a little fun and think laterally, producing more work that is satirical or transgressive.

I plan to write up a summary of my learning logs and collate the work that I’m most happy with for presentation.

Self-reflection on part 4.

I took a long break over Christmas but I’m back and ready to get back to work.

I received lots of helpful feedback in my report for part 4. As always I was shown a lot of questions about my exercises that seem very obvious in hindsight but weren’t explored at the time!

Also helpful was pointing out what areas seemed useful to me personally to expand on and return to in future exercises, for example the methodology applied in the visual distortion exercise, and the simple line drawings.

I think in general I need to be more consistent and methodical with my research, and apply a good level of work ethic and commitment to every exercise. I think sometimes I can focus too much on what I want to do and not what the course is asking me.

As an artist I think it’s pretty clear that I favour the drawing elements over the design elements. I don’t see this changing in the future but I do think I can bring a greater balance, and spend some time researching good design. In the final part of the course hopefully I can work on and improve my skills as a designer.

My ability to embrace new things and do secondary research was praised, so I’ll aim to continue with that in the future, but special emphasis on design elements and being more methodical in my practise.

Self-reflection on Part 3.

I’m pleased with the feedback I received for Part 3. I’m happy with the results of many of the exercises and I have a lot of areas to focus on in order to improve and develop.

Particularly my tutor mentioned that she thought a few of the exercises were very beneficial for me personally and something worth repeating and reflecting on in future coursework, especially viewpoint and composition. There were a few instances where I was maybe neglecting the graphic design part of illustration and over focusing on the drawing, which I think is a fair point. I also need to think more about the broader context of illustration, marketing and publishing, and think about trends, audience, publishers, that sort of thing.

I was also advised to spend more time drawing on the go, from observation when out and about. I plan to look in more detail through some of the recommended reading on urban drawing and drawing from life. A life drawing class I attended last year may be meeting up again over the Christmas holidays, which would be great.

The next part of the course is about developing your own style which I feel is really beneficial for me. For the next part I need to be more self-reflective and write about what I have learnt from the course so far and how to implement the processes from the various exercises. Particularly in the coming exercises there is more opportunities to build on the knowledge I’ve picked up so far.

On the extra-curricular side the Discord server I set up for other Illustration students picked up lots of new members and some expressed interest in broadening the board for other OCA subjects. It’s nice to have a place to chat with other students so we don’t work through the assignments in isolation and it’s a really convenient place to ask quick questions and get feedback.

Finally the areas where I was told I was strongest was in secondary research, willingness to step out of my comfort zone and drawing characters, which I’m really happy to hear. My areas to improve involve analysing and using information, more thoughtfully reading the briefs and building on previous exercises when approaching the new ones. I’m also to draw from life and observation as often as possible.

Self-reflection on part 2

After receiving my feedback for part 2 I have a lot of points to consider when moving on with the course.

Firstly I’ve given the blog a bit of a makeover and added some quality of life improvements. There are now more subcategories in each menu bar to easily find each exercise in the right sequence, and I’ve chosen a theme that keeps the menu bar visible at the top of the page. In the future I need to be more consistent in referencing my sources, and can freely post more types of images for example, illustration or critique since my blog is not for commercial gain and I don’t need to worry so much about copyright infringement.

My main takeaway from the feedback is to really focus on meeting the brief in each exercise. There were several occasions where I went off-brief, in the exercise on using reference, mark-making, choosing content, etc. I need to ask myself what exactly am I being asked to do. This is going to be my biggest goal going into part 3.

Specifically being more methodical in how I question the remit of a brief. I got some good feedback on how much unexplored territory I went past in the second assignment, point of sale display. Making sure to explore ideas thoughtfully and thoroughly, maybe not being so quick to abandon ideas or avoid following different creative threads.

Thinking about how my illustrations can be in service to a bigger story is a key point in improving my work in the future. I was advised that I have a passion for drawing and storytelling, so being thoughtful about how all components of a given drawing can add context and meaning to a narrative will help to elevate my work.

I’ll also try to be less selective with sharing parts of my sketchbook, including parts that weren’t successful. Showing the full scope of my research process and various brainstorms and doodles.

Something that I would like to do for the next part of the course is to try to make time for more suggested reading, working through some books on illustration, field drawing and perspective.

Self-reflection on Part 1.

After receiving my tutor feedback for Part 1 I was advised to write a self-refelctive piece in preparation for approaching Part 2.

My overall experience beginning my first OCA course has been exciting and gratifying. I think the structure of this course makes it so you get what you put in. Many of the exercises are quite open ended, and approaching them in an enthusiastic, creative way is how to get the most benefit.

I initially found it a little difficult to get in touch with other students, and was worried that the alienation would make it difficult to stay motivated in the months ahead. I joined a group on Facebook for the illustration students and found it very friendly and supportive. Later I went ahead and created a group chat on the app Discord. Many of the other students have already joined, and I think it’s a nice casual way to keep in touch.

With regard to tackling Part 2, the main takeaways I got from my feedback report was to cross reference between the previous exercises, do more exploratory sketchbook work, and do more secondary research. Going the extra distance to read and view lots of different illustrators’ work as inspiration for my studies is good advice, and something I’ll keep in mind when writing up subsequent exercises. I also feel like I have a habit of thinking that my first idea is my best idea, so challenging myself to really explore different options before committing to one plan of action.

It was also recommended that wherever possible I should draw from observation. I think again, this is something that would really demonstrate my willingness to go the extra distance and find features in the world around me to directly observe and reference, and feature in my work.

Looking forward to part 2.